I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
If i could write about anything I would write about seeing my family. When I can see them and they are not busy and I would take them to the movies and eat popcorn and having fun because i love my family.
Kia Ora Aone I really like the fact that you love to spend time with your family, I do to. My family are more important to me than anything in the whole wide world! I am in love with your blog as you post a lot of things about you just at that moment... An improvement could be that you add a bit more pizzaz such as pictures, colour etc etc.
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Kia Ora Aone
ReplyDeleteI really like the fact that you love to spend time with your family, I do to. My family are more important to me than anything in the whole wide world! I am in love with your blog as you post a lot of things about you just at that moment...
An improvement could be that you add a bit more pizzaz such as pictures, colour etc etc.