Today in hurumanu three we did, Simple to complex sentence, to practising for our assessment It was also to improve our writing. I really liked doing it because it is not going to improve my writing, for making blurbs for you like I'm doing right now. So I really want to finish this and improve my writing expectantly when I am in the physic with Mr Rizenger. Today I am with Mrs birth, doing the simple to complex sentence's.
Kia ora Aone
ReplyDeleteI liked being able to see your final work on your blog, well done! You had some great ideas in your introduction, but I want you to re-read it again. There are some simple spelling mistakes that have actually changed the meaning of what you are trying to say. I wonder if you can notice them and fix them up.
I liked the sentences you shared with us! Keep up this awesome work!
- Miss Birtch