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Monday, 10 May 2021

The Hero

 Hello fellow readers,

for the last couple of days me and my hurumanu group have been writing about our heros around a fake story or a real story. I just wrote a random story though. so here it is I hope you enjoy my juat a random story...

Have a good time reading this story called The Terrific Belief.

The Terrific Belief!

Cold and gloomy day there was a mist, with a little child crying. The little girl was crying because she lost her mum. A lady was trying to help her find her mum but she wouldn’t move…


Then I found out she was a mannequin with a voice box inside of her like it was the sound of a little girl crying. Next minute a clown comes out with a creepy face and it ends up being an old man. The old man just stood there staring at the lady, it was a struggle to not stop staring at him it was like he was trying to hypnotize me but it was also really irritating. 


The old man’s name was Zack and the lady's name was Alicia. Alicia was a 32-year old and the old man was an 82-year old. They were both just staring right into eachothers eyes and they couldn't stop. They were bugging each other.


But they  just couldn't stop. Zack was thinking in his head * Alicia is really pretty I want her I am going to take her *. But Alicia was thinking in her head * Ewww why and I am looking at this ugly rat, he is so disgusting *. Then Zack keeped on taking a step closer every time another tick went off the clock. Alicia was thinking at that time * EWWWWW stop coming closer and closer go away *. Every second Zack just gets closer and closer and closer. 


Alicia Thinking * I need to run away quickly * Zack thinking * I need to get her but I think that she is going to run away *. Both of them look at each other and then Alicia runs for her life and Zack follows her.  


“ It Is not a great look,  “ Alicia said.

Zack thinking * I need to run faster to keep up *.

They both run for their life...

Hi I hope you enjoyed my story I highlighted all of the capitail letters while most pf them at least and all of the full stops...

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